By Chris Crevling
When hell crashes down like an Armageddon
when chaos is brought upon the streets
when total disorder takes your mind
where will you be
we know what we do
we control what we think
we know what we want
you feel so sure
that everything will be all right
and you want me to run and hide
I'm always running
I'm always hiding
I'm tyred of all this madness
I cant stand you
I cant stand these feelings i have
I hate you
I love you
its all the same it all still causes grief in our hearts
something that makes so much pain should be good
but if love is good
then why does it hurt so much for me to love you
why does it feel so wrong
why does everyone care so much
I'm just another person in this shit hole
I'm just another body in the 'material world'
you are the only one who knows me
i don't know me
I'm so confused
someone help
this isn't a cry
its a need
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Thanks for reading this poem. This is another one of my pieces that i wrote.
Written December 7th, 2005
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OH MY GOSH... I love this one more than I did the other one I commented on..its sooooo freakin deeep!!! totally,..totally awesome!!! you do an awesome job, and have real talent for writing...I LOVE THIS FREAKIN POEM!!
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They would not call it a crush if it did not hurt. <3
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Very heartfelt and moving
Whooooooaaaaa! This is a very heartfelt and moving poem! It is so full of emotion, I can feel the heat and passion pouring out of it as I read it
This is an awesome little poem that I thoroughly enjoyed reading."I'm so confused
someone help
this isn't a cry
its a need"
What a way to end this piece
it is perfect.
On the critical side, the 2nd line of the 5th stanza I feel should have then y changed to then why to match the rest of the whys in the poem. I think you are very talented and will keep 'em coming for all of us to enjoy.Thank you for posting this for us and welcome to AP
Dragon Tamer
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