snow clad firs in line
as if on winter parade
let battle commence
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from past observations!
Written December 6th, 2005
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This is a beautiful poem. i enjoy reading your poetry alot. keep writting and thanks for sahring.
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I could envision the warriors as they stand at attention so straight and tall, ready for the command! This is beautiful,
Lomhar, what a great idea. It sparks the imagination in a wonderful way. I really love this one. Great job. Shancy. -
Thank you for your most generous and encouraging remark on my haiku...I assume you are of Scottish heritage?...and obviously a former soldier...and of course you are indeed correct in your observation of the transition from nature to war...regards...Dan
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An interesting perspective here going from a nature scene to a war scene. I've worn winter whites while on exercise in Norway, very effective.
well done.
John
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