Our First Kiss by Celticmoon at All poetry

Day in
Day out
Night after night
With each passing hour
My mind travels
Across vast plains
Of love and lust
Every minute
Passion building
Increasing my longing
Desire growing
Intensifying my yearning
My heart repeatedly
Calls your name
My soul screaming
To be released
Its been so long
The time is now
Standing before you
Not a word do I say
My hungry eyes
Fixed upon you
My hands quickly move
Grabbing you
Pulling you close
Pressing my body to yours
The heat of my passion
Unmistakeably evident
The pounding of our hearts
Echos through the night air
In anticipation of desires fulfilled
You entwine your body with mine
I can bare no more
No longer can I resist
Instantly our lips lock
Our bodies
Our souls
Imploding in
A volcanic eruption
Uncontainable
Within this universe
Together, we are lifted
With wings of love
We journey
Far and beyond
Any lover's fantasy
Caught and wrapped
Entangled in a web
Of desire and passion
Leaving us to drown
Within the pleasures
Of our first kiss

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Written December 6th, 2005

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ShadesXofXGray
December 23, 2005
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First kisses do go somewhat like this..lol except I wouldnt be able to word my first kiss poetically.. it was something like
wet, sloppy
too much tongue
lol
anyways.. great job on this very lovely poem!
thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
Love,
Kid
Celticmoon
December 16, 2005
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When the love is present the kiss is perfect. For it is the longing for that first kiss that creates all the emotions spoken of within this piece. And when the kiss comes to be, all the emotion that has been built up in the longing for the kiss will explode and rip through the body causing all that was stated within this piece, thus making it the most perfect and ultimate first kiss.
Edited on Dec 16, 4:04 p.m. because ''.
Soul-2-Soul
December 16, 2005
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wow, never has a first kiss seemed so intimate and explosive...and to yearn for such a mind blowing moment in the way you described gets my mind wandering and wondering if i could ever live up to such an experience as this. I would hate to fall short of such a vision from someone who meant so much to me. i would hate to disappoint them.
Celticmoon
December 7, 2005
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LMAO........sometimes the wait makes it all the more worth it!
Always Deena
December 7, 2005
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Went my husbands Sr prom with him in 1986...didn't kiss him til 1991 when we by chance ran into each other....5 yrs to kiss me goodnight....I was soooooo worth it!
Beautiful!
Deena
Iohagh
December 7, 2005
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My my my my my
I I I I I
oh oh oh oh oh
Wow.
Fearnloathing
December 7, 2005
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Great Shit.
Great Shit. Much like the Doors song The End. An End of childhood innocence, yet so sweet. It is difficult to discribe in words those last few moments. Closest thing you'll come to a panic, or Heart attack, for at leas 20 years(I'm using my dad as an example, sombitch has had 3 heartattacks and he's only 37, damn shame, cause it's all self inflicted). Absolutly Beutifull!
poeticwords
December 7, 2005
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This was very good.. It is lovely that you can take such a moment and explain it so beautifully. I find that i have trouble with that.. I admire your work.. And you inspired me to write.. thanks for the wonderful poem!

-Kim
Celticmoon
December 7, 2005
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So glad you enjoyed my kiss
Sorry you cannot remember yours, but I don't remember mine either. This is one I long for that has yet to happen.

Blessings
celticmoon
Kain
December 7, 2005
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Beh..heh..eeeerrrrggggyyyy.. That was supposed to signify the noise of complete melting..ness. My dear sweet celtic lady, how well you write the feelings of a first kiss. I don't remember my first kiss. All I know is, it was with a girl. shrug I don't remember who, where, or when..

Yours,
Kain
SomberShadowz
December 6, 2005
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Excellent
Wow, absolutely breath-taking. The emotions, laced within this piece, tugs at my very soul. What a wonderful way to describe that first kiss.. I believe you expressed, nearly every thought, and emotion that passes through us at that very moment. I'm blown away, really I am. You have a great talent! I truly enjoyed reading this piece! And I thank you for sharing it with us all!

Keep up the excellent work!
~S.S.
Celticmoon
December 6, 2005
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See you have not forgoten it. It was just lying in wait of something to bring it back to life once again.
Abdul T Alishtari
December 6, 2005
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Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
My last mind rocking kiss was so long ago I barely remember it but reading your write, it begins to come back to me fully. Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
Tarja
December 6, 2005
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Awwww... this is so beautiful.. I love first kisses! So... intense.. so .... ... like you know... there are just no words!
noir eclairage
December 6, 2005
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Oh wow... this is beautiful.
The description is excellent, very vivid. I only see one way of improving it and that is in this line:
"I can bare no more" I think you meant to write 'bear'.
Amazing poem... it has a wonderful romantic tone to it.
I want an experience like this!!!
~noir ~
Heavenly Angel
December 6, 2005
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A most beautiful sharing of your first kiss! Wow! How very romantic and intense this is! Quite enjoyed reading this one! You have a fine talent, my friend; thanks for sharing it!
Celticmoon
December 6, 2005
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Richard,
As always thank you much for your very kind words. I must agree one never forgets their first kiss. Though in this case it is this first kiss I long to share with someone.

Blessings
celticmoon
i luv cupcakes
December 6, 2005
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Wow this is very romantic. Very intense poem about your first kiss. That's very detailed and desciptive I love how you describe the feeling of it. Awesome poem.
♥Kayla