Promise you'll wake me from these dreams
Silence my screams
Please stay with me;
don't leave me be
Kiss me as I'm falling asleep
so I don't weep
Dry all my tears,
silence my fears
And when I awake, hold me tight;
silence my fright
Please calm me down
and stop my frown
Author notes
Mauve is so adorable. 
Diente is kind of a joint ownership between myself and Opaque Beauty...even though she made up his bio. 
The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff
Written December 6th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Song Titles For Inspiration, Now Write In Forms! by Sadien Sathantae.
300 points, ended December 10, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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awe, i really liked it! seems to be a confusing form of poetry, but you conquered it well. nice job. "Kiss me as I'm falling asleep so I don't weep Dry all my tears,
silence my fears"... my favorite stanza. This poem was simply fantastic! =D lolz!
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Heh...This is a cute form, but kinda difficult with the syllables. I'm glad you liked it. X3
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Awh; this is adorable, darling. ^ ^; It's, like, SO much better than my Minute Poem. e e; ~Head nod action.~ Mine was all.. BLAKHJGIOUICK!.. And yours is oh so pretty. x) Lmao. Yeah. I'm rambling.. Soooo.. I shall leave you alone, and stuff.. Only.. Not really.. 'Cause we're talking now.. e e; ~Shut up.~
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You should so enter this contest. But yes...I really like this 'cause it's sweet and such. Glad you like it too.
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This is so sweet Rose and wow! You used Minute Poetry! I wasn't sure about this type but you use it really well and I like it. I might just try it.
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Glad you liked it. Good luck with judging.
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This = awesome. Lol, the poem is totally different from the song, but hey... it's all good. Nice job, and good luck in my contest dear.
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