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tears from a broken heart

the moment we met
i knew will soon will be regret
we loved each other then we could ever know
but the warmth of your tone suddenly turn cold
you cheated you lied
i wasn't good enough for you
i was used meant nothing to you
as the tears fall
my heart stay  broken
shook teared and token
fallen in deep cold hole that you put in my heart
how to love to  again didn't know where to start
as weeks and months go by i think of u
and i still start to cry as my heart begins to die

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this is a old poem and it was a guy i fell for it was mistake i like him
Written December 6th, 2005

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  • Mentally Speaking
    December 6, 2005
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    Good

    Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it. This poem is straight forward. You must really be hurt. I have many more poems that can help you with your heart break, just read thru them. You will find em'. Some of the very first ones I believe. They are right for you. Check em' out, comment all you like. Thanks.