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Christmas Banquet(Rictameter)

Christmas
Time for a feast
On turkey, sage dressing
Rolls, cranberry sauce, gravy too
For dessert, plum pudding, chilled pumpkin pie
Piece or two of chocolate fudge
Much thanks to mother for
This bountiful
Christmas.

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Billbard
Written December 6th, 2005

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  • Walk-Free
    December 25, 2008

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    delicious.

    this made my mouth water and my heart was warmed with the familiar feeling of Christmas.

    Thanks and Merry Christmas

  • Judith Chandler
    December 22, 2008
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    Stop, you're making my mouth water! Nice rictameter.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Elvenfairy
    November 29, 2007
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    Sounds more like my family's thanksgiving dinner. We always have Goose and plum pudding and winter squash and chocolate pies and fudge, and gingerbread... lol now I'm hungry for Christmas dinner! Very nice write. Thanks for entering my contest. Merry christams and good luck!


  • Princess Peach
    November 23, 2007

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    i liked it, i have to agree with Madk2007 it does make me hungry too! good luck in my contest and thnk u for entering


  • Madk2007
    January 1, 2007
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    GREAT

    This poem makes me hungry just reading it.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 1, 2007

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    Awesome form on this piece and a great festive piece for the holiday. Very well done! Now I think I am hungry Happy Holdiays

  • Madk2007
    January 1, 2007
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    this poem reminds me of the fun of christmas


  • PerfectImperfection
    December 16, 2006
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    A very unique sort of rictameter! Makes me hungry!!! Best wishes in the contest!

  • Madk2007
    December 12, 2006
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    this poem totally describes Christmas.Thanks for entering my contest


  • Samplette gold member
    December 12, 2005
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    C-
    turkey
    pudding
    cranberry
    dressing
    fudge
    rolls
    pie

    Sounds like a feast to me...yummmmmmmmmmy!!!!!!!!!!!! You used all the words in your chosen option. Thank you for entering.
    Sam

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