You make me feel as if your my best Friend in all reality your my life. You make me laugh you make me smile you make me so happy when i am with you. with out you i feel lost no one to lean on but as together we are a couple. i wish we were together now i wish we could never be apart. you make me feel as if i don't have a worries in the world. i wonder i hope that it will be like this all ways and forever. But all good thing come to an end but for us hopefully not any time soon. love you all ways
Your Secret Love
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Written December 6th, 2005
A contest entry
- Inspiration please! anything goes! by woman onamision.
650 points, ended February 25, 2006, 59 entries
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wow this is an amazing piece. i love the part:
"with out you i feel lost no one to lean on but as together we are a couple. i wish we were together now i wish we could never be apart. you make me feel as if i don't have a worries in the world"
that definetely reminds me of my boyfriend. this is a beautiful and heartfelt write. keep up the great work. thanks for entering the contest and good luck! -
that's sweet.I love it.you really did an exelent job!Keep writing.
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love u sis
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WOw this is rockinawesome....so haven't talked to you in a while...hope you are ok well gotta go hun....love you very very much
XOXO,
Cassie -
awwwww cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just be careful ok be careful about everything you know how guys are nice and "in love" with you one min. dumping you or breaking ur heart the next...damn you guys!!!!! oh sorry my life got into that lol well still good job and good luck
love,
Brandie -
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awww... Hey darlin!!! This is a very sweet poem!!! You did a great job on this!!! I used to have someone I felt like that about!!! Keep up the good work and I miss ya!!!
Hugs,
Mommy
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