All wounds heal in time
But this one goes too deep
Your abuse of me was unbearable
But the lack of your presence is worse
And I have no clue
Of how to deal with unhappy love lost
With you my life was ever blue
Alone my life could be the cost
All wounds heal in time
But scars fade much too slow
Every time you left I cried my tears
But never these savage tears of red
Because I have no way
Of dealing with unhappy love lost
With you my thoughts went not astray
Alone my life could be the cost
...It may
But all wounds heal in time, they say...
Author notes
My ex-boyfriend broke up with me for the 6th time a week ago.
Today I wrote this..
Written December 6th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- dark writes + im looking to add to my allpoetry family! by nobodys-girl.
300 points, ended December 19, 2005, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great
I must disagree though....all wounds do not heal in time...some wounds are only made larger in time...Even still, a great write
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argh omg this is an amazing write and i believe i am adding you to my favourites without any hesitation i havent been on this site for like ages but now i am i am reading people i havent read before but im glad i am now cos this poem is great
keep writing
laura x
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