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The Color of My Heart

~The color of my heart,
~Is one that is lonely and dark.
~All I can feel is the hurt and pain,
~From being nothing more than a pawn in his game.

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This poem is a work in progress.
Written December 6th, 2005

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  • Iwantu2
    December 6, 2005
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    Well for being a work in progress it was pretty powerful as it is!!!!!!! OMG! It was great, I loved it!!!!!!!!! I also loved the way you compared yourseld to a pawn. Awesome write; short but awesome indeed!!!!!!!!