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How Should I Feel?

~Does anyone know what it feels like to have your heart,
~Ripped from your chest and torn apart?
~Do you know what it feels like to have loved,
~Thinking the person came from above?
~Their sweet words are poison, seeping from their lips into your soul,
~This is their ultimate goal.
~They reel you in by saying "I love you,"
~When all they want is sex and then they leave you alone and blue.
~Can you tell me how to feel once they have torn out your heart and said good-bye,
~All I want to do right now is lay down and die.

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Written December 6th, 2005

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  • Z---
    December 14, 2005
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    good work

    sorrow feels inside as I read and realize, this piece of artwork is stated fact, for millions live with this sad reality of cold hearted hatred that another has used and manipulated them... I realy do sometimes hate the world.. anyway good piece of work dear, keep up the good work

  • BurningEmber
    December 6, 2005
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    nicely put

    this has a good message, but remember that not everyone is that way.. i've had it happen to me before, but i was quick and got out before anything too serious happened. just be carful about who you fall for. it's never easy to lose someone you love, but if they don't treat you right it's not fair.