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Secret Love

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To the one I love,






Many a day I think of you. Many a night I cry cuz I'm blue. So often I see you walk on by. Not once stopping to say "hi". My heart grows more heavy each day. Not much more can I take hearing the words you say. For every time you speak, my knees grow weak. If you only knew.........just how much I really love you. So many times I've tried to find the words. But never finishing since everything just sounds so absurd. So here I shall say with pen to paper....my love for you I cannot taper. Writing all I been wanting to say. Crying....my tears partially washing the ink away. Heed my words and take a moment. Let me show you why it's me you torment.




Each time I look in your eyes, I see no lies. Constantly, they sweep me away. So intoxicating I must say. Your lips, soft and sweet as wine, I often think........Oh how I would love to drink. Your hands, big and strong. Your touch I have desired for so long. Your body so perfect in every way. What else can I say? From a distance I've watched so long. And now it seems I cry with every love song. Perhaps we will be together one day. For this is something I always pray. I hope you see, just how much I truly love thee. Know in my heart you are forever locked. For this secret I can no longer keep blocked. So hear I stand..... pouring my heart into my hands. You are welcome to all I have to give but know without you I cannot live. You are my world, completely and true. All I can say is I do so truly love you.






With Love Always,


Your Secret Admirer

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Written December 6th, 2005

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  • Oisin silver member
    December 18, 2005
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    You have found the words.

  • Celticmoon gold member
    December 16, 2005
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    Aww Sins, hun you are too kind..


    hmmmm.... and there is that word again.........SWEET!


  • Soul-2-Soul
    December 16, 2005
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    your heart carries a deep message and it is impossible not to be moved by such a piece. Your heart and emotion that has been exposed to us, is simply amazing. your words touch and caress ones soul...beautiful write SWEET bel

  • December 9, 2005
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    This is absolutly beautiful miss moon.Shhhhhhh don't say a word
    Awesome write me luv
    Angel

  • workshop
    December 7, 2005
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    pretty sweet celtic ..liked it very much

  • darell
    December 6, 2005
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    Exquisite!

    Amazing! A bonifide masterpiece of mega proportions!
    The quintessential expression of a lovers heart yearnings.
    This was written with great tenderness and care.
    The affection and warmth in this poem is unmistakable.
    My prayer is that the intended recipient would be moved
    to action. Brilliant work! Bravo my dear!

  • Sunkissedrose
    December 6, 2005
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    THis was beautiful. I love the fact that it's anonymous in a sense, and that it's so powerful. I hope one day, love is no longer ignored.
    ~Carrie

  • Always Deena
    December 6, 2005
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    What a grand love letter! So sweet the longing for what your heart craves. Well Done!
    Deena

  • Breaking The Girl
    December 6, 2005
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    This was pretty cool, a little generic and definetly not what I thought it'd be, but good, I think it'd be even better if you changed the lines, "Many a day I think of you. Many a night I cry cuz I'm blue" to something more original, nice job though. -Amanda

  • Celticmoon gold member
    December 6, 2005
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    So glad you liked this. This is actually a piece I have been working on a time now. I never could get it quite put together the way I wanted it. It just sudden seemed to fall into place today. I must say I am rather glad it did too

  • Heavenly Angel
    December 6, 2005
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    This was an AWESOME piece of poetry...an AWESOME message! I hope with everything within that the message is more than well received my the intended receiptient! (Ok, I can't spell that word, lol!) I LOVED this! What an awesome entry in my contest! Thank you so much for coming by and entering! Wow!
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