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Why ?

Why are you doing what you are trying to do
I hate you for all that you have tried to do to hurt me and my heart,
I cant take all this you're putting me through
What did we ever do to you so bad that you're trying to kill them slowly with so much pain to me and them...
Keep it up and I hope I'm next to fight the battle of hell with you because I'm tired of you hurting my family
I should of knew that when you died you would be the new SATAN!!!!

Author notes

THis is to my Deceased grandmother who keeps harming everything that is going good until she tries to kill someone I love
Written December 6th, 2005

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  • eternalpoet
    January 5, 2006
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    3 Stars ***

    hey desarae *hugs and kisses*.. sorry to be late to make a comment on this.. its been a month since you have post this poem and i havnt commented on it yet .. i am really sorry, i hope you forgive me

    by the way this poem is really full of personal anger..i hope no one was really bad to you... if there was anyone then that person will really be SATAN ..

    very nice write... good work.. thanks for sharing my dear friend.. ....

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend..... just keep it up... your humble little friend... ... .... .... - vic ( who else? )


  • xSallyxDollx
    January 2, 2006
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    Just wnated to stop and say hello and read some stuff since I haven't heard from you in awhile. You put a lot of emotion into this which is great it fits along with all the words. you phrased everything awesome. Great job keep it up!!!


  • HisxLittlexPrincess
    December 13, 2005
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    this is great..
    it a strong and powerfull piece
    Good write! hope to read more of it
    Lynn


  • tears.of.silence
    December 9, 2005
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    WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That last part was just Like WOW. I cannot even yeah. Ok. I need to so calm down right now. This poem is just outrageously filled with hate. Amazing. Good write thoguh . Kahy


  • ohhryaan
    December 7, 2005
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    wow this is awesome, it's really powerful and strong. you did a really great job. you will never be harmed


  • aRdNeK
    December 6, 2005
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    Whoa, this is deep. Very powerful, emotional, and descriptive. Sorry things aren't going well for you. I do hope things get better. You did a wonderful job of putting your feelings into words. Great job! Keep up the amazing work! And hang in there!


  • cake
    December 6, 2005
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    Oh the dead can't harm you, perhaps it's best to let the deceased rest even if we haven't liked them that much in life.
    cake

  • vanity1991
    December 6, 2005
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    wow great poem i loved it. soo powerful and effective.
    (if u got time pls read my poem 'woman in the mirror ' and tell me wat u think thanks)
    well done

    ~peace and luv~

    vanity1991

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