Mother, remember what you said about him.
You said he's not my type, he acts sweet but I see the devil in his eyes.
Mother o mother, you are so right.
Why o Why, didn't listen to what you said,
Now every thing's too late.
Mother, remember when you told me that?
I started to argue with you and forced you to take it all back, but you wouldn't.
I left home, to be with him.
But when I came to his door, he gave me an icy, cold stare.
I'll remember it forever.
Mother o mother, I want to come home now.
But why o why, I let my pride take control of me.
You called and begged me to come home.
But I turned you down, I started to yelled at you.
O mother, I'm so sorry for everything I've done.
I know there is no turning back.
I'm such a fool.
At that time I only thought about him.
Thought about him, no longer loving me.
Why o why, I'm such a fool?
Ending my life with someone who's not worth my life.
I'm sorry for causing you all the pain and the tears.
Mother o mother, finally I can come home now.
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Love for my mother. Who always help me everyway she can. She is the best of the best.
Written December 6th, 2005
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you told part of my life......damn that was creepy, but in a good way! liveing is truly the only way to learn, and i'm glad you know people like that are so not worth your time or love. the emotion is beautiful. you made my job even harder....thank you. good luck!!!
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awww few drop of tears coming down my face.....I love it. it so perfect this poem make me sad and cry inside. you did excellent job with it. keep up the good work
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There's some strong force of emotion in here..I love it.It's a perfect write to show everyone that they can turn their mistakes around.You won't learn how to turn mistakes right from wrong until you actually do them.Like the old saying, "You have to do it in order to learn." You did an excellent job with this.
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I think a lot of people will be able to relate to your words I know I certainatley can. Sometimes we think we know it all if only we would have listened to our mother's. You put a lot of emotion into this. Well done and keep up the good work
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