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True Colors

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Buried deep
Beneath lies
Hidden behind
Mystic illusions
Creating a falseness
For all to see
Shadows veil
What lies within
In the darkness
Truth is locked away
Out of sight
But not,
Out of mind
Constantly battling
Concealing all that is
Living daily
Wearing a mask
Braking hearts
Manipulating friends
Playing the world
For your enjoyment
May one day
The strings you dangle
Be severed
Leaving the puppet master
With no puppets to play
May the curtain
Be lifted
And truth be known
Bringing forth light
Taking away the mask
Exposing the lies
Showing all your
True Colors

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Cyndi Lauper
Written December 6th, 2005

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  • Always Deena
    January 15, 2006
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    OOOOooooooo Good one...I like this shadow you have cast throughout the walls.
    Deena

  • sjgaither
    December 24, 2005
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    Very nice entry! Thanks for entering!

  • December 23, 2005
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    wow this is pretty deep!
    i like it alot
    "great job here!
    This is a very beautiful and wonderful poem,
    one of this best
    The imagery was strong and very vivid and the flow was smooth from start to finish.
    I love the emotion put into this piece it really lets the readers mind just
    kinda wonder and set up the scene in there mind.
    Excellent job

  • LovesLostMemory
    December 6, 2005
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    inspiring

    I really like this piece. It's deep. Awesome job. Keep it up.
    LaRae

  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 6, 2005
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    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

    Deep inside your dark
    hidden is your heart
    though many play parts
    your heart still imparts.

    Though in reverse slides
    all that you hide
    only truth you imply
    saves us from lies.

    Nice write.

    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
  • hot-tamale
    December 6, 2005
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    good

    This is a neat picture and it makes a good background for this poem. I like how you end the poem with the analogy of the puppet master being left with no strings.

  • Celticmoon gold member
    December 6, 2005
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    Yes, that is exactly right!
    When the table turns and light shines, the truth will be known. In that alone I keep my faith.........always!

  • December 6, 2005
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    i really really like this poem and i kind of understand this theres people that hide behind lies and they torment you and make fools of you and hrt you but when the table is turned willl they like it

    is that right???
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