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Written December 6th, 2005
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Pleasant holiday write. You might want to leave out the first Christmas here:
as we sit by the Christmas fire
dreaming of a white Christmas; (and replace it with blazing)
otherwise, this is not bad. You've certainly met all the criteria for the contest. -
Wow .. loved everything about it .. the falling snow was a great addition.
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!! :F
Thank you my dear sweet and wonderful Prince... Forever, Angel
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THANKS FOR THIS AWESOME REVIEW!!!!!
oh, my God,I finally get some comments [besides an adoption ok, LOL]Thank you so very much for this, it means a lot to me... Your (annoying) friend always, Angel
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There were several lines in this that I just loved but I have to say the one that hits me with a POW! has got to me the imagery and just the great overall sound of the lines that read... "Snow-topped ferns bow their sleepy heads". To me, the image and the words just create a beautiful scene. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der
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A TRULY BEAUTIFUL CHRISTMAS POEM
This is a truly beautiful Christmas poem; the pictures are so beautiful and relaxing. -
This is so beautiful mom! It really made me feel the moment and the excitement of Christmas. I loved it. Thank you for sharing with us such a beautiful and exciting poem. Blessed be ♥Nena♥
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Excellent!
Positively beautiful. What a grand picture you painted for us here. Me being in California now, I will greatly miss all of what you have written here as Ohio has beautiful winters
I miss the snow, I love it especially when it is just cold enough to snow but not too cold and it snows those big, huge flakes and when you look at it coming down at night, you look up at the street lights and it looks like a giant kalidoscope. Geesh I need to quit or I will be writing you a book as a comment 
Anyways, thanks so much for entering our contest and for getting all of the titles included in your poem, it is just beautiful, you did a splendid job. Best of luck in the contest and may you have a blessed holiday season. Be Well and Be Blessed
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A beautiful piece of romantic poem that evokes love and romance between the persona and her dearly beloved one.
I admire the word flow and the visuals in this piece.
GREAT WRITE!KEEP IT UP! -
nice job at combining all three titles like we asked. This was a lovely winter poem with some great thoughts. thanks so much for taking the time to enter our contest and the best of luck to you
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!! :F
I thank you for your help, because now I see where you're coming from... the word I chose instead is tranquil... for it's softness, lethargic is laziness, and although some of us do get "kethargic" in the Winter time, I saw what you did, thank you once again... my dear sweet TomisB... My love, yours as always, your friend, Angel
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How taken we are with the untouched, unmarked snow. You have created a beautiful image here. I only argue with one word. Lethargic. I would find something a little less negative in its conotation. It could be just me. Take care. I hold you in my heart. Love,Tom B.
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