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Gone

Gone
Lost in a past of another
Gone, far away
And I bother

To try and save you
When I have never had to
And you go anyway

Smiling into past days
Dreaming into past ways
Going mad when I'm still sane
Living in mundane

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Written December 6th, 2005

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 26, 2007

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    Beautifully written.
    Thank you for sharing such beautiful, lost words.
    I find myself lost in the pasts of those before me and no, I can't look back nor forward as what I see may frighten me.


  • Exploit Stereotypes
    December 27, 2005
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    0.0 I like it...I like it a lot!


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    December 12, 2005
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    wow... i am utterly shocked that this hasnt had comments yet, it flows really nicely
    great poem
    laura x