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Just another day

Its christmas time again
everyone has there trees up and pretty lights all around.

Different santa's in the mall
with little kids on his knee.

Shops are busy with people buying there christmas gifts
looks of joy on their faces.

It makes me sick, i want to vomit
Christmas isn't real, its a selfish time of year.

I don't know why i feel this way
but it is all very true.

Its christmas eve, the kids are asleep waiting for morning to come
I wish i could spend it with you.

Christmas day comes and goes
thats it for another year.

Presents are opened  
dinner is served.

Why did yuou have to leave at the best time of year?
I didn't even get to spend ONE single christmas with you.

On a dark rainy christmas eve, you were making my wish come true
but there are always stupid drivers on the road.

Intensive care til new years eve
you coulnd't hold on for one more day.

Why didn't you just fly down?
then you could be here with me now.

I only have one thing on my list this year...
You.
All i want for christmas is you.

Author notes

ok this prob isn't what you wanted but i couldn't really write a happy one.
but its what i want for christmas... i want Adam!!
he didnt really die in a car crash.. hes still up north.
but this is something that has happened to someone i know.
argh anyway hope its ok!!
Written December 6th, 2005

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  • Ishvara
    December 12, 2005
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    rad

    awww that's a lovely write very heartfelt i'm sorry to hear about that but that's generally how things go when you really care about someone
  • Darkest Fairy
    December 6, 2005
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    hehe no he didnt die.. thankgod!!
    he was just my inspiration for this poem!! teheheeee.
    haha yeah next xmas is sooo far away! but he might be coming down after new years!! fingers crossed! but i highly doubt it. owel sometime during the year ill go up and see him

  • tualau--goddess
    December 6, 2005
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    hay kyz
    this was good! i'm glad adam didnt die lol. dnt wry bub, there's always next christmas, if he can't make this one!
    love n huggles cutiepie.
    mwa!!!
  • Darkest Fairy
    December 6, 2005
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    thanks soo much for the comment!
    im glad it touched you, thats what i usually aim to do sometimes when writing for a contest.
    good luck with the judging!

  • Heavenly Angel
    December 6, 2005
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    Whether real or imaginary, this piece shows true, raw emotion and it touched my heart deeply! Very well written, my friend! It's as if you put your heart on the page! Thank you for entering this in! I appreciate it!
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