Words are drained from this pencil
Sweet words that I want to give you
And I can't sleep, I need to tell you
That I when we're together I feel perfect
When I'm far away from you I fall apart
What you say is sacred to me
Your eyes are so pretty, I can't look away
You whisper to me…baby
Promise you will stay with me
You don’t have to ask me
You know that you're all what I live for
You know that I'd die just to hold you
Stay with you…
Some how ill show you
That you are my night sky
I've always been night beside you
So many nights I've cried myself to sleep
I never thought I'd say that…
I never thought there would be you.
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Written December 6th, 2005
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Thank u
it was really sweet of u commrnting on my poem
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This was heartfelt and thats always awesome in a poem
it was also really sweet and cute as other have pointed out...cool poem and thanks for your comment on mine
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I liked this peice a lot. It was worded very nicely. I also think that it was a really sweet poem to write. It was really cute
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This is such a great piece, I loved it, it was so loving. Nice job.
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Thank u zeltria i miss u
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Great poem!
When did you write this? I've never read it before. And it's just so so sweet! I an't believe just how delicately and passionately you've prtrayed love in its purest forms. -
Thank u 4 the comment and 4 the applause
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Beautiful! This is not annoyingly mushy. But just perfect!
Really great job. Keep writing.
-Gabriella
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