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please remember

im giving up,
that's all i can say.
please remember the nights we talked
hours well spent under the moonlight.
our past, our present and talk of the future.
forever.
remember when our bodies entwined
our hearts grew fire,
and a question was asked.
forever was our future,
but not anymore.
everythings changed
we're just faces at a party
usless people crowd our minds
to forget eachother.
what is love, anyway
but a word of nonsense.
i've written about love,
this so-called word of forever.
what is forever, anyway.
for all we know there is no forever,
no tomorrow or even a yesterday.
a dream is a secret, a feeling a whisper
just please remember me
when u finally kiss her.

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Written December 6th, 2005

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