Say goodnight to the dreams of yesterday's twilight...
Death and sorrow enfolds, the end defeats the purpose of life
in the wake of poseidon.
In excess, we disregard the glories
of the night in endless fall.
awaiting the turn of events from the aftermath of modern day
catastrophes of an avenging sky.
We,in the enigmatic centuries of strife
had endearingly kept the promise of hope in the rites
of winter's solace.
Author notes
Written October 5th, 2005
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Wow! The entire time I was thinking of Katrina, and I hadn't even realized that was the inspiration! Awesome work here! Nice word choice!
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This is pretty apocalyptic...
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Another very well penned piece you have here..
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seems like you really enjoyed my poems? hihi. such a kind lady to leave comments
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hey dude, astig to ah, naks on going parin poetry natin ah...ingat ka ha..miss yah...nakaka emo nanaman dito sa swiss..geesh...
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Great job. its tres interesting.
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Sounds great so far, and it actually fits the other hurricaines and natural disaters that have befallen us too!! If it is not finished, yet then I shall return to read again, I liked it the way it was though!
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i'm finally awake from hibernation! i'm back on track hell yeah! This is a poem was inspired by the aftermath of hurricane katrina...
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