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Forgive Me






 

Tonight
Truth pushed forth
Made itself known
In the midst
Of overwhelming lust
Thoughts of you
Flooded my mind
My heart cried
This was wrong
Lust surely evident
Passion and desire
Completely absent
Longing and yearning
All that is left
His lips upon my skin
His hands caressing
All the while
Filling me with
Disgust and self loathing
How can I do this?
No emotion present
My heart locked
Onto another
Pushing away
Apologizing
Trying to explain
My heart's desire
Trusting you
To understand
My heart lies
In a distant land
Awaiting the touch
To set my soul on fire
Longing for the kiss
That will make my body soar
Yearning for the one
To quench my thirst
Satisfy my hunger
And fill my desires
I'm sorry
Is all I can say
This was over
Before it even began
For I cannot
I will not
Deny all that
My heart cries for
Please, please
Forgive me

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Written December 5th, 2005

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    March 9, 2007

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    Oh this is an awesome write, sweetie
    Very in depth and with so much feeling! Awesomely done and that picture is awesome
    Thank you for sharing this with me!


  • Celticmoon
    December 7, 2005
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    ~Pisces Romantic Profile~



    The sign of the Fish rules the House of the Unconscious, which says alot about the world Pisceans live in. A dreamy state is very attractive to these folks, one where some delicious secrets are hidden from their lover, only to be sprung upon them at the right moment. The Fish enjoys alternating between conscious and unconscious states, the better to develop a romance in their vivid minds. When it's back to earth, Pisceans are selfless and intuitive and love to serve their lover.

    Showering a partner with exquisite fantasies and other sweet things becomes a blissfull state for both. The emotions of the Fish run deep and can be rather erotic IF their lover knows how to release them. Those born under this water sign can flow like a river and have a sensitive and spiritual nature, which can be very alluring.

    There is nothing humdrum about the way that you love. You have a flair for the unusual and the creative and are drawn to those who shun the conventional. You shy away from those who tend to be over-possessive. Your love affairs are also wonderful friendships.


    Now if that doesn't show that my heart rules my soul then nothing does .....LOL


  • Soul-2-Soul
    December 7, 2005
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    seems your heart rules your soul and there is definitely nothing wrong with that. Its amazing what the heart does to one who is in love. The heart does peculiar things and puts us in weird and amazing positions. The one that deserves your love will be greatly rewarded for your heart is pure.
    excellent write


  • Celticmoon
    December 6, 2005
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    what do you wish to collaborate on?


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 5, 2005
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    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

    We must collaborate soon. Your heart is too good to suffer or so I think. Anyway. Great write. Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

  • faeorie
    December 5, 2005
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    Wow, this was very interesting. Sounds like a few instances I've had, though you seem to be the stronger of us. Great poem!


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 5, 2005
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    Do you mean disgust - really a sad write, of thinking of another while being with one other , tragic really, no happiness here at all. Well written, flows so well and is easy to read and understand.

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