Below zero, I should feel chilled
Strangely with love my heart is filled
My world suffused with warming glow
I should feel chilled, below zero
Was just by chance that love came by
Was at first sight I don't deny
A sweet romantic loving glance
That love came by was just by chance
I've found my mate on this cold day
Our ardor chased the frost away
Forever we'll recall this date
On this cold day I found my mate.
Author notes
Written December 5th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Rhyme by Diamond Butterfly.
300 points, ended January 26, 2006, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Winter & the Holiday Season by Shadow of a Crow.
450 points, ended December 24, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Winter Rounds Contest - 1 by amaranthine lover.
600 points, ended January 9, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Winter Poetry by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended November 13, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - WINTER by Rhythm Child.
400 points, ended January 11, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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thankyou for entering. I hope you enjoy the contest and have fun.
take care
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Rhythm Child
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love is wonderful in any season, but winter is so romantic, in the beauty of snow, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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Interesting style
Well done, gets the message across in a pleasing style.
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nicely written, great use of rhyme scheme thanks for entering
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love is in the air!
This was nice! I loved every verse and every word. It was cheery and sweet. What a wonderful read and idea. I wonder, is this from personal experience? Nice to see a positive entry in the contest.
Again, wonderful penning. Good luck! 
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Very sweet, its simple but lovely. Thank you for entering, great rhyming skills!!
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Nice poem
This is a nice poem with great rhyming skills. Good luck in the contest. Shancy. -
Very nice. I like the simpleness of this, and you honored the form well. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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