The stone angel cries a dirge,
Ne’er to be heard
For she incurred the wrath of the gods,
Being the rebel she was.
Her hair used to be dark, dark as the night,
Her eyes, in the past, were green as the emeralds that
lay at her stony feet.
Her now-grey wings used to be pure white, always ready for flight
And her face, full of beauty and passion still is.
Her silent scream curses the divines,
For plunging her angel self into an abominable hell,
And she vows that she will one day be on the front lines,
In the war she plans to wage against them once again,
To release herself from this pit whence she fell.
Author notes
Um...i wrote this out of pure random-ness...so.......it sort of...how do i put it....SUCKS? yea. thats it. R&R please!
and im NOT talking about rest and recreation,dumdums.
Written December 5th, 2005
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uh..yay?
sorry, but im sort of slow sometimes and it takes a while to process stuff.
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uh....i think i got the meaning of it. ><
thank yoooou!!!! ^^ -
amazing
this poem is amazing...there are no punctuation errors, descriptive words, and a message that is clear, but only when read line by line, meaning its not a poem that repeats what it says over and over again. -
Yay! Skaa! It...took a while to get here.
Anyways, that didn't suck! great elaboration,
so beautifull ..>< -
........wha? i dont get it. how is she not much of an angel? she was an angel, and she rebelled, and got thrown to earth, condemned to stay in the form of a statue.....i dont get it. ><
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wargh, if the others liked it so much, they should applaud it...
I like the imagery too.
heh, not really much of an angel is she?
"The stone angel cries a dirge,"
I've got a poem titled Stone Angel...
You've a nice way w/ words. Go write more. -
It doesn't suck! I totally agree with furyxdespair!
I really like the second stanza where you described the angel. So pretttyyyyy. Very nice imagery
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Life=birth^age+death
OMG it soo does not suck...I love the subject the flow the everything..If i had anything to give i'd give it to you.....
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