Hidden
deep within the
shell like existence, she
claws her way against failure to
success .
Author notes
Big bully with bog brush.
Choice 7#
Written December 5th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Quality Not Quantity by CelticKisses.
300 points, ended December 11, 2005, 6 entries
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Lol..well the crab is a water living creature..and it faces the elements every day but I will understand if it did not quite meet what you were looking for
Glad you enjoyed it though 
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Lol I said elements, earth, wind, etc, not starisngs.
But I'll overlook that as this was such a great piece. I think a lot of people will be able to relate to it on a very personal level.
Well done, thanks for entering, good luck and keep penning!
Love CelticKisses
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Lol John, have to say I agree but it was a condition
strange the kind of language we have to use as an entrance into the "other side" ....
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Many thanks
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You paint the image that all of us can relate to, finding our own way to success and doing everything we can to get there. This is a great cinquain. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest!
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Loved the poem
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John.
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