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I Want You

You are some one
Who doesn't look like any one
You are very sweet
While walking in the street
And whispering a bird's tweet
I knew you years ago
And now I'm asking you from my life not to go
I'd like you to be my eternal lover
Since life couldn't lend a better treasure
Let me see you from inside
With all your feelings that you hide
Be with me when I'm in trouble
And help me to gain happiness in double
Well
You are not just some one
For me you are every one.

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Written December 5th, 2005

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  • godiva
    January 4, 2006
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    Thank u a lot 4 reading my poem and i really like ur comment so i gave it an applause

  • Consuming Sadness
    January 4, 2006
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    I really can relate to this poem. Nice job. There are times that I think there will be no one there, but that is what I want. Thank you.

  • godiva
    December 28, 2005
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    Thank u baby
    i miss u


  • zeltria
    December 26, 2005
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    Oh my God how sweet! Where the hell can you find someone like that? I feel as if I've spent my entire life just longing for someone like that. Someone who will walk hand in hand with me till the rest of eternity.Somene I can call my own!!!!!!!!