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Torn Apart

Here I sit
Tears falling down my face
As I clutch the phone in my hand
My mind spinning around
"I have something to tell you."
Those words made my heart stop, fearing for the worse
"You're breaking up with me, aren't you?"
"Yes.  And I don't love you anymore."
That was it
I couldn't take anymore
Tears fall silently as my whole world came crumbling to pieces
It felt as though you ripped everything out
And laid it on a table
Then stabbed and destroyed everything until
There was nothing left but hurt and sorrow
I was dead
You had torn me apart.

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Yeah, even though I've moved on, I still had to write out what happened.
Written December 5th, 2005

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  • December 5, 2005
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    I'm glad that you moved on ... thats all you can do in life, you live and you learn.. you gotta do what you gotta do.. Im proud of youu!! I know that the right guy will come along one of these days!