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Sometimes I feel I just want to run away
Swim as far as I can reach
Just to become free
Free of all limits, of all restraints
A hawk wandering in the sky
Without anyone telling it what to do
Simply alive!!
Better than every living thing
Giving orders all the time
Yet never receiving any
Moving from a cloud to another
Sucking the beauty of each one
Altering an identity from time to time
Changing the whole atmosphere every day
Being the ruler of everything
Seldom being ruled…
Everyone deserves to be free one day
But the question is: when will that day come?

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Written December 5th, 2005

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  • sustaind
    December 5, 2005
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    can really relate with this,changed my mind dont read my stuff,your writes are special,mine are destructive,keep it up

  • godiva
    December 5, 2005
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    Thank u 4 reading it, and i know that this will never happen but i like to dream


  • lemon meringue pie
    December 5, 2005
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    really captures life in its hand and then lets it run with the rest of the herd. good stuff.