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Mr. Peepers

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My best friend lives in California
Where you really can't tell, seasons change
The smogs is so heavy like the fur on my cat
It is all around and just hangs

My cat thinks it's funny
To lie around or mutilate everything in site
He creeps behind me late at night
And pounces on me, what a fright!!!

My crazy ole cat, his name is Peepers
He has such a merry old way
He annoys me with all his energy
Sometimes he purrs on all day

He frolics and plays, like a cat on the prowl
Chasing his toys all around
The Christmas tree is his climbing post,
He's Santa, leaving presents in mounds

The tinsel that hangs is an awesome thing
For Peepers to play with all night
Unfortunately, do not laugh, my friend
Where it comes out, it's not a pretty site.

But all in all, as the winter comes
And my winter blues bury me so
It's Peepers my cat that cheers me up
He definitely puts on a show!

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"fo shizzle Jim-izzle" Cheer up... I'm in New York in the snow belt!!!
Written December 5th, 2005

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  • jasminerose gold member
    December 20, 2005
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    Thank you Ken for the congrates!!! I'll be having a real fine day now!! Thanks Jasmine
  • InBetweenThoughts
    December 20, 2005
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    Hello Jasmine, wanted to congratulate you for winning your Bronze trophy! Have a beautiful day, Ken...IBT

  • jasminerose gold member
    December 16, 2005
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    You can say that again!! lol It is like having a housefull of children..glad you like the poem!! Thanks for commenting and have a Merry Christmas..hey? where does Santa put the presents then?? lol Jasmine

  • CountryCousin
    December 16, 2005
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    This was very cute.

    Between the cat and my little dog I cannot put up a Christmas tree so I just have one on the shelf that is a ceramic tree. I liked this one about the cats. Animals are something else again aren't they?

  • jasminerose gold member
    December 6, 2005
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    Hi Scary Guy, I really had fun writing this one, I am glad that you enjoyed it and I only hope it will bring a smile to your friends face!!!Jasmine

  • Scary Guy
    December 5, 2005
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    that was great! I'm sure my friend'll really like this one.

  • jasminerose gold member
    December 5, 2005
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    Hi Sandy, lol Thanks for the cheerful commments and for applauding my poem!! Had fun writing it!! Always like a cheerful poem, especially if it is one to help cheer up a friend!! Glad it made you smile Thanks for reading and I hope your grandaughter enjoys it as well!! Have a great day!! Jasmine

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 5, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Hi Jasmine, This was such a wonderful poem. Really made me smile!! I will read it to my young grandaughter Ashley, She will love it. I loved your ryhming. I am partial to rhyme and yours was terrific. Take care and have a wonderful day. Sandy

  • jasminerose gold member
    December 5, 2005
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    Hi Ken... IBT Thanks for the applause and wonderful comments. This poem was a "cheer up my friend" entry. It is his Peepers, I have a puppy, who is just as crazy at times...Can relate myself!!Glad it made you recall a similiar experience!!! LOL Thanks again for reading!!! Jasmine
  • InBetweenThoughts
    December 5, 2005
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    Excellent

    Good morning Jasmine, this is a funny poem of your cat Peepers! What a name, lol. It sounds as if he enjoys a meal of tinsel from time to time, it reminds me of my girlfriends dog being fed from my son some Hershey's kisses with the aluminum foil still on them, lol. I'm sure you can see the similiarities of the two! You poem was wonderful and a joy to read. I'm sure your children would love to sit and listen. Thank you for sharing some of your experiences and give Peepers a pat for me. Have a great day, Ken...IBT
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