All my fears have taken me over inside,one more lonely day
alone with myself,drown ding in a pool of tears.
So much pain inside my soul, why do I feel so week hearted?
Time and pain have definitely taken its toll.
There is now a frown where the smile used to be.
Now an older woman desperately needing inner strength.
There is so much pain and suffering all around me.
Why do I let all of my fears overwhelm my heart?
I am much too young for this,I need to stop it before
I fall apart.
sunshine1
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Written December 4th, 2005
A contest entry
- 4 rules for 4 hundred points by So Called Chaos.
400 points, ended December 9, 2005, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Good job mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Angelbabie
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wow thats really good!!
i like it alot!!!
i can relate quite a bit. -
I feel ya sis! Inner peace is something hard to find but it is possible! I hope you find it very soon you deserve it! I love ya!
Dark-Princess -
I say, ride your fear don't let fear ride you
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I really liked this poem. Good luck in the contest!
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yes i agree^^^^ i really liked this poem! good luck in the contest!
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Good poem, I liked how at the end you recognized that you were tearing yourself apart with all your fears, you drew a good picture at the beginning too. thanx for entering my contest.
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