Snow...
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Written December 4th, 2005
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It doesn't seem awkward to me now, so maybe I skipped a word or something?
That's very confusing, not to mention embarrassing... I just made myself look like a total idiot.
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!! :F
Hi, I have reviewed my piece and I do not understand where I may have made a mistake as to interpretation... Please explain, I am not upset at all, please do not believe this, but, I do not do rhyme (hardly ever) but I try to make sense... I appreciate your comments and please help me... thank you so very much... your friend, Angel
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Very beautiful, and descriptive. It seemed awkward to me in a few places, though. Wonderful work, and best of luck to you in the contest
Coconut
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This poem is gorgeous. It is always amazing to watch the wonders of nature, to see the snow falling or to wake to see everything is covered with it. It gives me a sense of renewal spiritualy. Thank you for sharing this beauty with me. Nena
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