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Are You Ready*

I just thought about you an hour ago
Get out of my mind.  get out of my mind.  Get out of my mind
There are no other men that i want to know
Get out of my mind.  get out of my mind.  Get out of my mind
We're still in the car and you wont let go
Get out of my mind.  get out of my mind.  Get out of my mind
"Are you ready?" you still whisper "No"

Author notes

He has struck again!! yes that is right ladies and gentlemen that have been keeping track this is the latest instalment in the Asshole cronicles.  Bringing the number up to 10 and two 1/2s.  YAY! (inspired by actual events may not be suitable for all audiences)
this is ont of place tho, should have been read after 'breathing in breathing out you)
Written November 28th, 2005

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  • peblenboulder
    December 6, 2005
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    I LOVE MY BITCH MAU

    aww... poor mauita... i like that.. i think i'm going to keep it. then again. i don't know... i'm sorry hun want me to kick him in the balls for you? or better yet... Hold him down so YOU can kick him in the crotch? AMEN TO ANGER AGAINST ASSHOLES!!!