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I don't know what to think

I don't know what to think
I don't know what to do
All my thoughts keep coming back to you
I try to block it out
But, all I can think about, is you

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this was writen a long time ago about a summer fling
Written December 4th, 2005

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  • John Dirt
    March 31, 2006
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    Short and meditative, great components for a great poem. I like the usage of words, very sing-songy. :]

    Hi, I'm John.

  • furryhobbit1290
    January 10, 2006
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    Um yeah i know this exact feeling. I've tried that before, i'll tell you that much. It didn't work. Great job

  • Painted Warrior
    January 5, 2006
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    This is nice, and it happends a lot to poeple. Infact I had a summer fling of my own that I felt like this for awhile. Great work.

  • beautifulXsuicide
    December 4, 2005
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    i like this. but i keep thinking i've heard this in a song somewhere. thanks for the comment on my poem.