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Sad Eyes... {Haiku/Senryu}

Missing image
Just looking at me
Staring into nothingness
Sad baby doll eyes

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Written December 4th, 2005

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 27, 2007

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    -awe-

    I'm sure you have lovely eyes, and your soul has way more than nothingness in there. But damn, I so no how those days can be, feels just the way you describe here. Thanks for sharing, much love poetess~


    -Timothy


  • December 25, 2005
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    This is a beautifully written senryu, along with a picture that terrifies me. Nice effect you've achieved there. It kind of has a sad, yet mysterious feel to it. The poem, i mean. Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck.

  • grannyeri gold member
    December 24, 2005
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    Powerful picture of staring eyes to go with this haiku. Good luck in the contest.