Three wise Magi follow a star,
delivering gift and traveling far.
Over mountains, fields and desert,
bring a new King gifts treasured.
Shine and sparkled golden gift,
also precious Frankincense.
Alas the one who brought Myrrh,
adored holy infant child on earth.
The Prince of Peace grace in light,
came to teach us wrong from right.
Heavenly angels in attendance,
lion and lamb lay calm defenceless.
The Lord thy God has sent his Son,
a promise of life everlasting in love.
~~~Suseann~~~
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Song is\''We Three Kings Of Orient Are"
Written December 4th, 2005
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Beautiful poem suseann, but in the title you wrote Maji and in the poem you wrote Magi, which one is correct? I think its Magi.
Excellent poem still, I loved it, and good little cartoon picture too.
best wishes as always
xElectricEyezx
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the maji of long ago
A hymn was ,this poem , so long ago , and a star they followed,
to see the lamb of God . Peaceful this sounded with a hope
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A lovely rewrite of the original...nice work. I did want five titles, but this is still a wonderful write. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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oh susie......more from your pen......this too....the three wise men....kings by right but honor the one true king....Christ jesus was born to bare all our sins....suffer and die so we can be forgiven to spend eternity with him....love the poem very much
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Really a good one.
This is simply beautiful Suseann and I like this version of that old song. I am really finding a lot of truly good poems in this contest. -
Beautiful Suseann. Thi sis just wonderful. It is good to see some real spirit of Christ mas. Lovely work!
~Lyrical
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