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A Whole New Way to View A Portrait

Your picture gets more blurry
Every time I stare at it
Through the bottom of this bottle

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Written December 4th, 2005

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  • Beaumonde77
    November 21, 2007
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    woah

    insanely deep.
    i think I'm in love.


  • aslanlight
    March 7, 2006
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    Hmmm as a recovering alcoholic/addict I relate to this intensely. Short but extremely profound! (and disturbing to me)

  • --lost-in-love--
    December 5, 2005
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    WHOO! I love this! It's so true. sometimes I find haikus are boring or too short, but yours was definatly just right! This was really good because it left me thinking about my own issues and yah, i dunno, it's great. keep writing

    "Temporary fix, for his heartache" -Neal McCoy, Billy's got his beer goggles on-

  • dame de la riviere silver member
    December 4, 2005
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    awe many hugs and prayers for you my friend. good write though the message is sad and of course only a temporary diversion. peace be with you.
  • Angeles
    December 4, 2005
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    damn. Good work.
  • Bright Shadow
    December 4, 2005
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    great

    short. but that's how haikus are. great poem. thoughtstirring.--_+The Shadow+_

  • Mick Lane
    December 4, 2005
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    thank you

  • choke-on-the-truth
    December 4, 2005
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    hmm. i like this. short but powerful
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