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Crow

Waking from a restless slumber
Drawing aside my window's veil
Surveying the world outside these four walls
I see you
Baleful beady eye returning my eye's favour

All the other birds cower before you
Pure in your blackness
Sleek
Honed
Proud

Gnarled feet grip tree branch with taloned intent
Its natural frailty caught in your vice-like grip
Nature stands or falls at your whim
Murk fills the sky
Clouds ragged and soaked in your blackness
Chaos swirls around you
You stand solid
Like jet black rock; harsh and unforgiving

The void of your eyes conceals intelligence
Purpose and steely intent
Watching the threads of life and wending unto ending
Awaiting your opportunity
To purify all in darkness  

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Written December 4th, 2005

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  • Zagreus
    December 4, 2005
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    excellent job. i often feel that the crow is on of the untimate symbols of drakness. well written i enjoyed it thanks!