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The sweet Tender Touch

The clock strikes two
He approaches you
She look nervous
Weak at the knees
The feeling like no other

He hugs her, not wanting to release
His face, Expression is peace
She still looks frail, nervous laughter
They walk off

The minutes pass
They are both nervous
The passion is present
Endless talk, its all pleasant

The clock strikes 7
He has to leave
She holds him near
with him, ther is no fear

They share a kiss,
Passionate
The moment is right
He likes her, to his delight!

They arrange to meet again
The date is september 11th
Remember that date
Because, my dear, that was fate

Author notes

from the heart to you jane, just for the records, im not on about 9/11..... sorry if anyone is offended....
Written December 4th, 2005

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  • Neko Mimi Soundwave silver member
    December 4, 2005
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    Interesting. A lot of emotion here and well the poem hits home. I will edit this later when I re-read it.

  • retard
    December 4, 2005
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    i liked this poem so much.. ^^
    and september 11th, god, although it doesn't affect me, i'm scared of that date.