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lovely

She came with a smile
She carried herself with grace.
she stood tall with pride
She spoke only to add joy
She seems to say i'm loveliness
I seem to agree
And said to self 'yes sure'

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I felt this when I met a lovely maidwho meant a lot to me
Written December 4th, 2005

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  • laya
    December 6, 2005
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    thanx.i'm encouraged.

  • Ankeeta silver member
    December 6, 2005
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    Nice attempt ...the words definitely say how special she is to you!
    Ankita