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hidden waterfall

Missing image
hidden waterfall
treacherous rock pool awaits
birds bathe cautiously

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one more time!
Written December 3rd, 2005

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  • Shancy Fayre
    December 4, 2005
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    Oh how I love the mountain's waterfalls and they certainly do
    have trecherous slippery rock piles. Your words painted a pretty picture right down to the colorful bird! Shancy.