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Fast Lane

All of the years of living life in the fast lane
     has caught up with me.I feel much too old and broken,
     It's time to set my soul free!
      Set my soul free,free from myself,because I am my own
     worst enemy.
      I always said,I would never let myself become addicted,
     15 years later,look at myself,I am so conflicted.
      My youth I left behind, the very first time I snorted that
     line.It made me feel so powerful,like I were superwoman.
     I felt like I could accomplish anything.It took about 15 years
     to realize, I am only human.
      My health is not as good as it should be,like an achy
     old lady,I creek and I crack,I can't feel my leg and I think
     I broke my back.My lungs are so full of nicotine and rezine,
     when I finally do die,I sure hope I make it to heaven!
                    sunshine1

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Written December 3rd, 2005

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  • Dark-Princess
    January 2, 2006
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    Whoa sis! This is a powerful poem! I think this will touch a lot of peoples hearts! I hope you do well in the contest! Love ya!
    Dark-Princess


  • BabyxBadger
    December 6, 2005
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    Wow great poem, it was gorgeous. It ran so smoothly and i get where you're coming from x
    Luv Lou
    :0) xxx


  • December 4, 2005
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    im luvin it!

    wow this is soo good, this was just what i was askin for!! i really like this, good luck in the contest!