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What is normal?

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We're told that big girls don't cry,
And that boys cheat and they lie.
Were suppose to be skinny like the girls we see,
While watching the pretty models on t.v.
We're suppose to be successful in everything we do,
We are suppose to cook, clean and sew too.
Were are suppose to be polite, and never swear,
We are always to be happy and also to share.
We are never to ask someone out on a date,
We are to like everyone and never to hate.
Well I'm afraid I'm not the average girl,
Things are a bit different in my world.
I'm a big girl and yet I still cry,
I'm with someone that doesn't cheat or lie.
I'm not as skinny as I'd like to be,
While watching the models on t.v.
I'm not successful in half of what I do,
I hate to cook,clean and my sewing sucks too!
I am polite, but I ALWAYS swear!
I am not always happy, and I hate to share!
I am the one that always asks for dates,
and there are alot of people that I do hate.
I am a strange girl you may choose to say,
Because I like to live my life this way!

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I just want everyone to know that I wasn't in a bad mood when I wrote this, the words just came to me and my computer was near by lol! I hope you all enjoy Thanks
Written December 3rd, 2005

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  • Hidden Shadows
    December 6, 2005
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    I love this! It's so true. People are way too stereotypical of women. I like that you're not perfect (because c'mon, who is?) but you don't spend your time and energy trying to be something you're not. That's what I collect from this piece anyway. Great write!
    <3Mary
  • petty foibles
    December 6, 2005
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    you tell them girl, i hate sexual stereotypes you are what you are and thats all you are, if you dont match up to someones stereotype thats their problem not yours they are probably fat lesbian cows with tattoos and beards anyhow!
    Edited on Dec 06, 11:42 because ''.
  • Lacyte
    December 6, 2005
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    And Bravo to you!! It is really a pleasure to find someone who stands up for who and what she is with pride. With this attitude I am certain you will go far, and it shows that you are comfortable in your own skin. I really enjoyed this write, it has good style and flow. Thank you for sharing.

    Keep well.
  • Kitten85
    December 6, 2005
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    Good for you. Love the way you use the poem to state your life and ideals. Hope you always keep this perspective.

  • Valley Girl Greeters member
    December 4, 2005
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    Free verse? lol

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    December 4, 2005
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    hey sarah , i liked this one, good job, hey you ever write free verse?
    tasha

  • December 3, 2005
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    nothing like selling yourself, this is a wonderful tribute to you, knowing who you are and being what you want to be regardless or what media tells us, well done, keep it up
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