The Feel Of Her Skin
Oh so gently I graze my
fingertips along her perfect
form body. As I feel her skin I see it
brings forth a cool chill
of her passion.
I press more intensely, her
smooth skin blossoms into this
radiant glow. Bringing a pulsating feeling of
energy that circulates through
my hands and overwhelms my soul.
I love to touch her soft, succulent, and sweet tasting skin,
from her face all the way down to her perfect shaped toes.
When I hold her and a gentle suction pulls and draws us closer
entwining us like a rhythmical dance. I love how it folds and
opens to form our bodies …
Sliding and swirling, simulated movements
when we are united. I love the feel,
the touch of her skin when
it's pressed up
against
mine.
Written By,
BrendaKaye 2005
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Written December 3rd, 2005
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Bravo!
Wow, what a passionate poem! I love everything about this one. The imagery and emotion are very well constructed with your excellent word choices. Very nicely Done! ~Peace~Gary
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i love this. i think it's beautiful that you were able to write such a passionate poem and giving quite the image without using unflattering words (you know what i mean?)
basically, you did a great job with such a clean language. that's what i'm trying to say, but i don't know, i'm having a hard time finding the words. lol
Great job. keep it up -
Wow! So sensual and so touching. The imagery of what goes through you mind as you touch her skin is magnificent. I love the way you worded this piece. I especially liked the part
I love to touch her soft, succulent, and sweet tasting skin,
from her face all the way down to her perfect shaped toes.
When I hold her and a gentle suction pulls and draws us closer
entwining us like a rhythmical dance. I love how it folds and
opens to form our bodies
Good job on writing this, you definetly have a way with words. keep Penning. Good luck to you in all you do. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece. -
WOW... this is a very special poem. Written with the tenderness and with passion, the trates of a skilled poet. I found this poem to possess such passion and yet still maintain a softness that embraces the reader.
You have a very special flair with this style of writting.
Keep up the wonderful writting...
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Thanks for commenting. I never really wrote sexual poems..but lately I have and I am getting pretty good at it..LOL Thanks for commenting. Brenda
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this is amazing! i felt the passion and intensity of the love he feels for this woman... how tenderly he touches her... its really beautiful and well written! luv always
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This is great. You have a great way with words and definetly show alot of passion and you do it well. This has great imagery. Put a nice picture in my head. It shows alot of talent. I will ahve to catch up on your work. I enjoy it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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questionis do you want to sober up or keep going,,,LOL
Thanks for commenting. Brenda -
I am drunk on passion... thanks for the great writing.
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Not so much hotblooded..just wishful thinking...LOL atleast I know I haven't lost my touch..get it touch... j/k ..
THanks again for your comment, they truly mean alot. Brenda -
Thanks celtic angel for your gracious comment. Brenda
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Thank you Jon, I try to be..teehee
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purrfect
very very sensual! I can see your very hot blooded. -
beautiful very intense.good luck in the contest
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Thanks Celticmoon for enjoying my poem.I think the contest is neat, I cannot wait to read all that enters,much
and respect Brenda
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This last line....."I love the feel, the touch of
her skin when it's pressed up against mine." Has to be my favorite line from the entire piece. That line alone shows passion. You did a wonderful job with this piece.
Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
celticmoon
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