You are the burning fire within
making me commit unholy sin
The fire that most people fear
is the one i always hold near
Death long thought of as silent and cold
but my fire will let me live long and be old
The fire within me is what keeps us alive
the fire is your love my dear it makes me thrive
Author notes
Written December 3rd, 2005
A contest entry
- *~fire~* by Faithless Angel.
300 points, ended December 11, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like your poetry....its interesting and thought provoking!! this is amazing work you have here!!!
Rosita -
Whoa! Deep, d-amour, really profound. I absolutely love it, my friend. You are a master of goth poetry, if I may say so. 
Best of luck in the contest, crossing my toes for you to win it. 
Jim
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thanks for the comment its is highly apreciated. Hope you will like future works as well.
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WOW.. this is truely amazing! i loved the use of imagery, its wonderful thank you for entering good luck
kerri xXx
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