Hush, dear little princess, there's no need to cry
For someday your true prince will steal all the pain.
Hush pretty angel, there's no need for tears,
Cascading down your cheeks like rain....*
There's no need for sadness in your world, my little star...
No need for you to not want to shine.
So won't you smile at me, precious jewel, precious angel
And know that in my dreams you will be mine...
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Written December 3rd, 2005
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beautiful
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*raises an eyebrow at the below comments*
Gorgeous!
Love, light & peace
Georgia
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i wish that i could be yours *sighs with a tear rolling down my cheek*
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good
this is a really short poem but yet still good -
HI
lol thats funny i love to do the same thing...but i usually dont post my songs on here...i dont no y...but i think thats great to do...
lol
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i wish i did have one and that i could write music, it is a song i wrote, i made the tune up in my head...almost all my work is like that, lol
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Wow...this is absoolutely beautiful.....jst beautiful...im sure u hear this about alot of ur work...but this really spoke out to me..do u by and chance play the guitar?...this would b a beautiful beautiful song to hear...thanks 4 posting this and i hope 2 read more of ur stuff!
~Naty
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That is so beautiful and sweet. I can not wait for someone to write a poem like this for me. Wonderful, I love this. Tink
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Sweet write.
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8/10 plus applause
an emotional write to be sure, like the others have commented on your imagery is impressive, i can just see the star up there now. lol. The colloqual way in which this was written flows well with the content, unlike most poets who write in the abstract you've thrown yourself in hteir as the central narrator/protagonist and this allows for a much deeper write. You can see how the characters feel and the rhyme for once ( most poets suck at rhyme, they let it take charge of the poem) accentuates the message and reaffirms it.
The double stanza structure seperated by ellipsis has connotations of union between the two halves not only of the poem but of the characters themself and this again strengthens the message. An excellent writhe which i would mark 8/10, congrats and look forward to reading more, with faith daniel -
tear-jerker
hey! i love your poems, this one especially. i like how much emotion you put into your works. i need a kleenex!
s for my bro!
akasha -
Precious Friend of Mine, I am reduced to tears as I read this. I can remember my mother actually taking time to sing to me and this was one thing I actually took time to do for my children as they were growing. I believe that spending quality time with children helps to divert disasters later in life. This is so well written that I would love to hear you sing it...maybe as you tuck in my poor emotionally drained body tonight. Lily is exhausted, but this is most soothing. hugs you tight
Lily -
Lullabyes...such a precious thing when done with great care and love. Just as you have written here, with great care and love.
Great job. I need more tissues. So good!
Just another Sucker for a Handsome Face
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wow that is so beautiful i love it
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Beautiful.
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