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For peace

Oh, my Lord
please
take my life
and leave this bird
to fly free.

Please
leave it to fly
over the rainbow
like my angel
and free spirit
in the skies
with my
plead.

Oh, my Lord
please
show her the right way
between the clouds
to come back
with peace
for all human beings.

Oh, my Lord,
Please...

Author notes

"Skyfull of clouds/angels"

GT: allpoetry.com/ Contest/166691 8
Written December 3rd, 2005

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  • Sonja
    December 7, 2005
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    Thank you for this very nice and precious comment.
    ~Sonja~

  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 6, 2005
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    How simply , perfectly beautiful. Everything about it is beautiful. thank you for entering!

  • Sonja
    December 4, 2005
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    Thank you simpliterature for your time to read my poetry and for so nice comment and applause.
    ~Sonja~

  • simpliterature
    December 4, 2005
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    Passionately delivered. A message of unselfishness to attain Peace. Well done. My applause.

  • Sonja
    December 4, 2005
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    Thank you Katie. Only unselfish wish and action could bring a peace to us.
    ~Sonja~

  • wishintreeUK
    December 3, 2005
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    Beautiful Poem

    This is a beautiful poem Sonja, like a prayer for worldpeace, more to the point, an unselfish prayer from the words you have penned in your first stanza.

    Well Done!

    ~Katie~
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