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Heartbreak

What do you do
when your true love
loves someone else
an all your tears
are wasted on him
and your heart
breaks more
every time you see them together
all you think about is him
and being his girl
but you know someone else
has taken your place in his heart
you've known from the start
he didn't love you
but yet you wanna hold on
what do you do
when he wants you out
out of his life
but you just can't
let him go...

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o i need you or do i
Written December 3rd, 2005

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  • a humble servant silver member
    December 21, 2005
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    Well i've never been in a relationship but i do feel for you and it isntough. But i'm still here to talk to and my ear and heart is always open.

  • xxunloved07xx
    December 14, 2005
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    I loved this poem and i know what your going through because ive had my heart broken by alot of guys but if you ever need me im always here for you i know i cant fix a broken heart but i could help you somehow if you need it im gonna go check out more of your work. love ya like a sis.
    ~*!heather!*~

  • Lost N Alone
    December 9, 2005
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    thanks for the comment mom
    Amanda
  • tmullins
    December 9, 2005
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    great question. one i think we have all asked a time or two inn our lives! I know that i have asked it several times, and i dont know how, but life just goes on, and eventually you do to. Then one day you find someone knew and the past fades away, one of Gods ways of making us stronger. It always hurts so bad when its new, but all things fade with time, even true love. its never as it was when you first fell in love, you still have to work on it to make it perfect and everlasting, just like with Christ, you must work on your relationship with God too, like prayers, and church, sunday school, small groups,and all your christian friendships. all relationships require work from all sides to stay good. Hope it goes fast for you, cant wait to see you perk up and write another happy one! mom
  • shattered innocence
    December 4, 2005
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    oh i can relate, it is just something you learn to accept and live with. Tell yourself you deserve better. In the future you will find someone you love and that person loves you back
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