I'm tired of waking up crying
all this time I have been trying
to find some reason
some reason for me to live
and some reason for you to love me
I wish I could see
and speak to you
but I can't your not here
you left me there
with no little care
I"m well a where
your not coming back
so now I can stop crying
and stop trying to think
of whether or not
to live
or die
the choice is straight forward
I must live to love
and I know I might have a purpose on this earth one day
maybe soon
maybe later
all I know is I'm tired of crying
I don't want to cry any more
can you help heal these sores?
and stop all the crying
so I can finally live
or die
I need to see you
and talk to you
I just don't know how to
~Emily
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Written December 3rd, 2005
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no its not one of my fantasy! bc one of my fantasy would be to escape the emotions for at least a week!! god i wish that could happen but yea im so stressed out right now its not even funny! but thanxz for ur comment
~Emily -
its really sad , sweety
whats wrong? or this is just your fantasy? i dont know but im really sad here after i read this .. sadly indeed , very well done.
xxx
papergirl -
thanxz!!! i hope to see the day as well and i hope it is soon!! i will let you know when i need a shoulder to lean dad! thanxz alot and check out my newest one am i real? its kool
~Emily -
Your heart is on an emotional roller coaster and I can feel it within your poem. One moment everything is wonderful and next your heart aches with such pain blinded in such confusion. I know it is hard but you must live, I can see how special you are, how beautiful your heart is.
This poem is written from your heart and soul... I am going to tell you something.. my sweet..
You have greatness within you.. but you do not realize it yet.. I would love to see the day.. when your spirit soars and finally feels alive... In that moment... No star will shine brighter nor will any sunset be more beautiful than you... This I know to be true..
Let me know if you ever need a shoulder to lean on.. I will be here.. -
yea thanxz alot u laid it out for anyone lol yea when they leave and u didnt get to say bye then ur like hurtin for a while ya know! but yea im still cryin cuz i dont wanna get hurt that badly again!
well thnxz gurl!
~Emily -
awe thanczx alot i try!
~Emily -
thankfully ashes of freak laid it out for me. now i can understand...lol...this was a wonderous piece...i can say that there are alot of people on AP who write this kind of stuff and yours is up there at the top. Great poem
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LOVED IT X2
this was so sad but really well put...exatly when someone breaks your heart and you cry everytime you think of them...you seem to wish to die cause it feels as if you have no purpose but when you relize they are never coming back you tend to get over them or start to and now more tears or nothin cause you'll find new love and they'll love you too and they'll be your reason...but anywho great write I loved it much...ttyl Emily -
yea thanxz lol i know i write dark poems alot!
thanxz
~Emily -
thanxz yea it seems like day after day this hole brings me in! and wont let me out!!
~Emily
love ya thanxz alot mommy!
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Deep emotional write!
Another expression of sad feelings and emotions, very well conveyed and left me with mixed thoughts of how and what to tell you and how far you have experienced this in your life..
There are fears deep inside of me that everything has been just spread up in hopelessness and it is beyond repair. This unwanted dark deep hole that has been drawing you in, day after day after day.
You have to grow your wings my dear child, you have to let that dark monster go away, and so with the wings you have you can fly away, seize the victories where they lie and stop crying once and for all!
I love you Emily!
Your mommy ninja
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o. that is sad. i like it its reallt good. its also dark indead. thats a great combo. good work
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