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Saying Goodbye

Have you ever wanted to die
When you were without your friends
have you ever said goodbye
to the one who your life depends on
ever been forced to move away
and start all over
in a place so faraway
where you will be alone forever

so sick of having to start all over
some place new
so sick of saying goodbye
to the one who your life depends on
leaving behind worlds of pain
that ll haunt me until the grave

could it be
i don't want to be here anymore
could it be
i don't want to be alone again
could it be
i don't have what it takes

don't know how I'm going to make it now
without my reason
don't know how I'm going to make it now
with all these feelings
don't want to be without you
don't want to have to say goodbye
I've done it before
now i know i don't have what it takes

don't have my reason
cant fight these feelings

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Written December 3rd, 2005

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  • pward89
    September 27, 2006
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    This is how I feel at the moment, you have expressed my trauma for me, I don't really know what to say


  • Cheeky paper
    December 14, 2005
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    Believe me I can actually related on the poem and it seems like this thing happens to my life for ever.. [ dont mind about that ] - anyway here's really nice piece , emotions and heartfelt .. Well , you aren't alone at all , you've got a lot of friend on AP or at least Im one of your friend ~ Good write & Very well done ^ _ ^ Keep your pen on your hand
    papergirl

  • Embraced Insanity
    December 3, 2005
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    I know where your coming from. Leaveing behind a world you love is so hard. Just don't give up on your life because your in a new town. I did once... wasn't very fun. But back to your poem. It expressed tons of feels and ideas that happened in a move. I really liked it. A great write, thanks for sharing it with the rest of us.


  • darkvixenpoet
    December 3, 2005
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    I know EXACTLY..and i mean that EXACTLY how you feel. I lived in my hometown for seven years...i grew up with everyone in my school, and in one day, literally, i was told i had to move and move that day...it was heartbreaking, and as much as i wish you didnt have to experience this, its comforting to know im not the only who feels like this *APPLAUSE!!!!*