Why do I love you,
even though I know you dont love me?
Why do I think of you,
when I know you dont think of me, too?
Why do I want to be with you,
when I know you dont want to be with me?
Why do I trust you,
when deep down you dont have that same trust?
You say its about HER.
Well what about HER?
OH HER!
Now THAT rings a bell!
You mean her,
the GIRL that was with *HIM* yesterday,
you know, when SHE was supposed to be with you but was "at home sick ?!"
Well now I hope your happy,
because you got what you deserved!
Maybe next time I try to help you,
you'll listen.
But you said it was about HER.
Its always about HER.
I guess you dont know that you've got something,
or someone,
good until their gone.
o just live with it.
* name has been changed
Author notes
I was having a very bad day and I had to get some frustration out, but if you want to read it be my guest
Written December 3rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Messages by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended December 9, 2005, 6 entries
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Very intense! Rock on! Tell him like it is! Some people wouldn't know a good thing if it came up and bit them on the behind! Loved this! Thank you for entering into my contest
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I agree with Danny!!
Awesome poem!! Even though I don't know who *Tyler is, I could feel the hurt!!! Great job!!!
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I LOVED THIS POEM GIRL!!! I really felt the emotion and hurt within every word. Great Job!! Was this about "you-know-who"? Well, I guess we'll talk this weekend, so I'll TTYL!!
Love Ya Cuz! And Awesome Job on this piece I'm proud.
With Love,
ArchAngel
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