Love is the emotion we were created from
two souls blending together to become one
whether it be from a marital commitment
or one night of having pleasurable fun
Love's emotions can create such fantasies
that often slip into our dreams of desire
love can affect you like addicting drugs
fueling passions as it fuels the fire
True love should come with commitment
to be lasting and endure through life
to be blessed by God in holy matrimony
blessing the union of husband and wife
True Love should stand the test of time
and be able to climb the highest hill
two souls connecting on the highest plain
living their lives according to God's will
Love has no boundaries it touches everyone
from the moment we are born till we die
it's scars can leave you quite devastated
make you so happy that it makes you cry
One thing for sure, it is worth the risk
you may get your heart broken in two,
there is something special when you hear
those three little words "I love you"
Author notes
It's so easy to say hello to love but so hard to say goodbye.
Written December 3rd, 2005
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Most beautifully written, my friend! Love is all this and so much more! Gorgeous write!
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I hope this belief turns out true. ..will give you a sure well proven answer which can be added to the records -statistical data ; how love is seen in life, after ummm... another 40-50 yrs.
For now, I'm crossing my fingers & hoping for the best.
Loved your poem
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This poem has a great deal of profundfity in it. Love is a Mystery you have touched upon.
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Excellet
Hey, Sandy. Loved it. Nice graphics. I was drawn by your tag line "Love is the emotion we were created from..."; a truth. God is love, He created us from love; there fore we should be love. Being love is one thing; falling in love is another. Emotion as opposed to existence. Wonderful background. Like your free style; still a little punctuation wouldn't hurt. Like musical notes and rests, punctuation helps us in reading the piece. Guess I am old fashioned. But then, who is to say? Still, I loved it. Like the "three little words" line. Women do like those words. Men on the other hand are more carnal. We find it hard to say "I love you." But will bust our butts in doing for the one we admire and love. Too bad. Once tasted; the flower should be nurtured. Alas, most guys don't; it's what you suggested "pleasurable fun". Tks for the lovely poetry. -
Love has eyes
Yeah Yeah Yeah and Love is not that alters when it alteration finds a beautiful soothing becalming background Sandy with the love birds doing their trick on me the reader and singing a song ..your poem so lilting in its softness so healing in its faithful quality and so trustworthy in its commitment...superb.
Shubs
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this is so sweet. it was a really cute backround and expressed feelings of love
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You did a beautiful job on this write, I think you hit LOVE right on the head, and yes it must stand the test of time. great job my friend, Getsbetter
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Great
Your interpretation of love made me smile. You just about summed it all up. And I got to agree with you; those three little words mean so very much. Hope to read more of your work.
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Good job!!!!!!!
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This poem is sweet. I understand it completely.
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